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Hearts' Abduction
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Hearts' Abduction |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He spoke to me eloquently he pulled me in with golden words he wanted and he needed me how pitifully I was lured. He stole my heart so easily I damn near gave it right away Too late did I discern his truth he never truly meant to stay. He took the fullness of my heart and threw the pieces to the ground though stolen, now unwanted so yet wrapped in lies, I remain bound. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Happens all the time. But that has nothing to do with the quailty of your write.  |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
A very good poem. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes we have to give our heart carefully...James |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful images of stolen and broken hearts - well written - thanks Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully, yet sadly written Sandra. ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well girl...jump out of this blue screen and go kick some butt..... Nicely written Sandra... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Being bound by lies creates amazing imagery you!!! Nicely put... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~The best we can do is learn from our experiences. Please heal that heart of yours S. Hugs and understanding, for such a write. *Peace love. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Peace to you....  much happiness and love too Sandra....Lauren~ Emeralds from mountains |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sandra, don't be fit to be tied! Break those chains, sweet lady |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A very good but hurtful write. Bet THAT don't happen again. But, if you're like me, it probably will. ~wranx |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
My heart was stolen, still it cries The truth of words were only lies I fell into the world of lust Again I cry, whom can I trust? To fill the empty space inside Upon the crest of dreams we ride To seek what makes our hearts all sing We try what comes, what life does bring I enjoyed the read Sandra, we all feel the way you do at times, chin up and keep searching, love hides maybe around the next corner. Goodluck. Sincerely Rick |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
catalinamoon, I have missed reading your poetry. This is beautifully worded.. and very well expressed. I hope your heart finds peace soon. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those lies threaten to choke the very life from you, don't they? *S* But someone who lures with pretty words and then shows his ugliness with no care to consequences isn't worth another tear... when you can believe that with your heart as well as your mind, those bindings will loosen. This is a sad but excellent write. *S* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
disentangling yourself from those lines we find them here, waiting to be seen and wondering when our own will find the heart. . . well, you know what I mean. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I know how frustrating it must be to be betrayed, but know deep down with all your heart a true love wll come along and will always be faithful to you and make you happy! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, So beautiful, and speaks so deeply of the love that's so elusive. I love your new picture...YOU are beautiful!! Love, Elise |
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