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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Threaded Thoughts Threaded thoughts turn in tangle Cause a kind of twisted wrangle Words of sorts all tied in brangle Reprieve lost while chances dangle Take this thread untwist the knot Straighten line in view of what From all heat erase pains rot Let those words all be forgot Remove the taint of hasty deed Replace it with soul's bright bead Give to those in want and need In grace and love plant truth’s seed Go forward now the path is clear No need to hold back in fear In ease of heart light shall appear Illumes your soul removes the tear Threaded line of tangled thought Erase the path reveals naught Tangle of a knot un-wrought Reveal shape of what is caught Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brangle? but it works! Love you...  |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Very well written. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yeah....Brangle???? Is that in the English dictionary??? Seriously, like the rhyme of this little piece of Mushy's brain.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
My darling friends, a little note brangle Verb Old English it means to squabble or fuss, can also be akin to a verbal melee. But I know you would have all worked it out, I’m just saving you having to track it down. I’m glad you like this little rhyme slip, or more accurately slip of rhyme    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MaaarshaLove~ I adore it when you teach 'us' something new~ _________________________________________ brangle \Bran"gle\, n. [Prov. E. brangled confused, entangled, Scot. brangle to shake, menace, probably a variant of wrangle, confused with brawl. [root]95.> ] A wrangle, a squabble, a noisy contest or dispute. [R.] _________________________________________ You look MAHVALOUS in your brubbles, brangles, and beads .... well, ya' do !!! Love n' hugs~ ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
fun to read and lots to ponder - I liked it - thanks Paul |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Hehe, I knew what that word meant!!! Too much reading on my part???? I liked the poem and words:-) Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the involved way you did this.  You know I like the rhymes! Nan |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Now if you'd just said that brangle was an Aussie expression ya know there would have been no fuss at all! Loved the read, it really grabed me!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I loved this rhyme Marsha! I knew 'brangle' was a word!  Good for you! ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Tangle, wrangle, brangle, dangle. There is non of that in this poem.  |
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