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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-06-30 09:19 AM



Made a mention of fishy meals
how correct diet is such a steal
think alpha omega and crustacean views
good nutrition will fill those empty pews

I did balance the scale
with a genuine fishy tale
and arranged an assorted platter
for the audience to enjoy the matter.


It's not the cod liver oil
you'd just as well let spoil
pursue a diet in good cholesterol
built by fish fatty acids...that's all



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-30-2002 09:26 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-30 09:50 AM


lol, thanks for dobbing me in with this write, it's fabulous as usual.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-06-30 10:06 AM



Kethry is very capable of inspiring others,
and I thank God for that!

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-06-30 10:40 AM


Now off to the local pharm for my alpha-omega


Kethry
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4 posted 2002-07-01 08:28 AM


This is contemporary kethmetrical didactical

When you wish upon a fish

I made a wish
Upon a fish
To balance all the scales
Upon a star
Was very far
And doesn't work for whales

I sat to dream
Beside a stream
Instead of to the moon
The moon was blue
In dream of you
And settled far to soon

I raised a prayer
To find you there
In hint of summer song
You raised a brow
"Stop wishing now,"
You said, "this is so wrong"

To catch a fish
And make a wish
Sets scales a falling free
Put down the bream
Within the stream
And turn again to me


Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marsha
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5 posted 2002-07-01 08:49 AM


Martin darling boy I love it, the flow is excellent your writing is always fabulous, and this of course is no exception. I love it utterly utterly.

Keth your response is fabulous and I love it, as Iā€™m sure Martin does too. I love the thought of balanced scales. Excellent writes both of you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

ecrivan
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6 posted 2002-07-01 08:52 AM


I'm dizzy now...but get your point after all that wishing it's better to face the issue at hand..hehe...sparkling stuff as usual Keth


ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-07-01 08:54 AM


Marsha,

Thanks for tipping the scales in our favour..hehe


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