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tracie66
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0 posted 2002-06-30 01:07 AM





Thanks to Marge for the inspiration, my muse has been feelin a little off lately and needed a kick start  

~HUGS~
Tracie



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (06-30-2002 01:08 AM).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-06-30 01:26 AM


Tracie darling heart and collector of my hearts dreams this is quite probably one of your best poems I've ever read. You are inarguably the best writer of hearts thoughts better than anyone I know. You darling heart write PURE MAGIC and that's no lie. YOU are utterly utterly utterly superb. And I know this, I read your writing and knew that you were a great writer.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-06-30 02:43 AM


Tracie,
it seems you and I share similar thoughts today but you have captured the emotion so well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-30 08:16 AM




(smiles) YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love these, sweet friend, you are sooooo good at these, I've never ever seen such poem/art ges like these before! (kiss on cheek) May you always cotiniue to write for dear heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-06-30 08:19 AM



As this opened slowly, I could read line by line, its petals of thought captivating...

Enjoyed this!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-06-30 08:23 AM


tracie66
You just proved every thing I thought you were.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-06-30 09:41 AM


Tracie...in the quiet of this Sunday morning..
I read your post and capured these moments.
Well done sweet poetess.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2002-06-30 10:11 AM


Soft and endearing Tracie ... I loved your phrasing, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

vandana
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8 posted 2002-06-30 10:12 AM


loved it
cherrypoptart
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9 posted 2002-06-30 03:32 PM


I really like the way you did this.....So very good.
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10 posted 2002-07-01 12:15 PM


So so beautiful, I really liked this a LOT !!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2002-07-01 06:38 AM


Soft and smooth.  I like the way you worded your thoughts on this.  Very much enjoyed.  
tracie66
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12 posted 2002-07-01 09:00 AM


Dearest MM~
you have truly touched my heart here, thanks my sweet friend for your very loving and kind words, they touched me ever so.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Dear Keth~
Yes I did notice that as well *S* you are too kind with your reply and I thank you for it.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Aww Noah~
What a lovely thing to say, you are too sweet my friend, appreciate all you have to say, take care.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Dear Sunshiny girl so glad you enjoyed, I enjoy seeing you here...thanks
~HUGS~
Tracie

Dear Seymour~
*Sigh* you made my day with your sweet reply

squeezes right back at ya
~HUGS~
Tracie

Enchantress~
Your words mean alot and I'm pleased you enjoyed this..thanks for your lovely reply
~HUGS~
Tracie

Dear Kit~
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this and I appreciated your sweet reply
~HUGS~
Tracie

Vandana~
thanks so much!!!
~HUGS~
Tracie

cherrypoptart~
glad you enjoyed!!
~HUGS~
Tracie

mycafe~
your comments are appreciated and I'm glad you liked.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Dear Mark~
it is very pleasing that you enjoyed this and I appreciated your wonderful comments..thanks.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sven
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13 posted 2002-07-01 04:39 PM


now this, my friend, is what you do best. . . and why I've missed it so much. . .

wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tracie66
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14 posted 2002-07-02 04:24 AM


aww sweet Sven
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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