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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-29 10:26 PM





~This one is for my fella ...~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2002-06-29 10:51 PM


Another one of your beautiful master pieces. I love it.
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2 posted 2002-06-29 11:01 PM


I love the calming effect of this one Marge!!!

Love is great, isn't it???

Love ya!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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3 posted 2002-06-29 11:06 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart and writer of the stars light In that place between thought and feel is where you rest in my mind, ever present and like this shimmering jewel of delight you illumine my soul. I love it utterly, I utterly love it MY STARS this is incredible writing utterly soul drenching beautification of the spirit. This is so totally perfect, the flow, the concept and the execution all connect to make this an utterly utterly fabulous piece of writing.

You know somewhere there’s a law that forbids you outclassing me, I don’t know where it is, but I’m sure if I searched the ancient statute books but it must be somewhere. So you must stop stealing the stars to illume your writing, you must stop dipping your think in the well of rainbow’s ink and you must halt in your ceaseless quest to be the best. But if you don’t I’ll still wub you.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Martie
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4 posted 2002-06-30 12:03 PM


Marge

So glad you're love is so sweet...give that fella a squeeze for me.

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5 posted 2002-06-30 12:32 PM


*sigh*
ahh forever lucky in love...what a beautiful poem for your fells Margie girl

~HUgs~
Tracie

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6 posted 2002-06-30 09:33 AM


Marge,
I'm jealous.

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7 posted 2002-06-30 10:00 AM


liked it
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2002-06-30 10:18 AM


Ah, Marge ... your creativity bubbles over, my friend. This is delightfully phrased, and beautifully presented. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2002-06-30 10:29 AM


And such a beaut it is, for your fella...
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10 posted 2002-06-30 11:27 AM


Tee-Hee ... this one started out after a conversation Bill and I had about 'colors' ...
LOL ... Most men just don't understand mauve (What's wrong with PINK ?)..
and crimson ... (What does that mean ? Crimson ???)
So when he does find this one in his mailbox ... I think he'll get the idea !
And I'll just *hug* his neck for the inspiration~

SuzieQ~
Thankee galfriend~

Devina~
YEAH .... it's just REAL SUPER~

MarshaLove~
Tee-Hee-Hee .... your reply one-up's my poem~
HELLO MARSHA ... stole a little of your MUSH, did I ?

Martie~
I will do just that !

Tracie~
Thank you gal ... love seeing you~

Seymour~
Now artist that you are ... certainly understands Mauve ... and I understand jealous~

VanDana~
Thank so much dear~

Kit~
Awwwwww ... thanks sweetie~
Good to see your smile this fine Sunday morn~

Magnus~
Thanks hon ... it's a beautiful day to be in love~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2002-06-30 11:45 AM


Marge:  Bill must fall in love with you, all over again, whenever he reads one of your poems written just for him! Or any of the others for that matter.  What joy you must bring to his life!

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2002-06-30 11:49 AM


wonderfully written and supurbly presented and I loved it - thanks - Paul
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13 posted 2002-06-30 11:51 AM



You are having so much fun
with your new weavings...
so much fun!

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14 posted 2002-06-30 11:52 AM


a splendid poem, I really enjoyed this one
Neeraja
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15 posted 2002-06-30 11:54 AM


How beautiful love can be... and how beautiful you "weaved" this poem!
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16 posted 2002-06-30 03:34 PM


A very beautiful poem.
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17 posted 2002-06-30 04:36 PM


Very nice Marge...James
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18 posted 2002-06-30 09:27 PM


Lucky fella he is!  

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2002-06-30 10:18 PM


BettyLou~
How'd you know ?
He's so wonderful ... and he's even learning to like crimson-mauve~

GoodKnight~
Thank you so much ... it was a fun little piece~

Karilea~
I am !  I am !

Stapleton~
Thank you very much~
Glad you enjoyed it~

Neeraja~
How very nice of you to leave such a sweet reply ... thank you~

CherryPopTart~
Thanks ... and I just love your ID name~
REALLY !

JamesMichael~
Thanks so much sweetie~

MyCafe~
Ahhhhh, I'm the lucky one~
Thank you hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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20 posted 2002-07-01 06:22 AM


He's a lucky fella Marge!

Love the clever arrangement.....Great work!

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21 posted 2002-07-01 11:10 AM


The presentation, the poem, and the love it expresses are all beautiful. *S*
Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2002-11-03 12:31 PM


Playing a little 'catch-up' ...
Replying from my library to some lovely people I missed ....

ETHome~
Thank you always for the lovely replies~

MySuthernGal~
Awwwww, thankee gal~
We're STILL there !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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23 posted 2002-11-03 07:19 PM


Oh, Marge the colors and the words are just making me delirious. Beautiful and what a gift to your loved one. Hmmm...gee, I wonder who that could be?    

Hugs, Marti

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