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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-29 04:52 AM


I Know I Would

Suppose I took you into my
arms and kissed you all over
the neck and ears and up and
down your back and all over
your smooth beautiful legs.
Well lets just say all
over your lovely body.
Oh yes my kiss would waste
no time finding its way
to your sweet lips.
Do you suppose you
would like that?
I know I would.

JamesLee
June28
2002

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2002-06-29 08:42 AM


I know I would too when it comes to a certain lady of my connection as well.  I think I will reserve most of the thoughts that come to mind on this one but I will say well done.
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2 posted 2002-06-29 03:21 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for this ecstasy to always fill your heart and bring a smile to your heart forever! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-06-29 03:54 PM


a powerful ode to the kiss - nicely done - thanks - Paul
Marsha
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4 posted 2002-06-29 06:38 PM


James darling boy I think this is utterly utterly perfectly written. I know exactly how I would respond if I were asked that question. And exactly how he react too. Huge grin Obviously he’d say My Marsha I think the answer would have to be ………… and then simply smile at me

You know I love this utterly utterly it is purely divine, brilliantly written darling boy I love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-06-29 06:40 PM


Penned in the heat of the moment!
Wonderful. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-06-29 07:01 PM


...YES!!...

Kethry
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7 posted 2002-06-29 09:21 PM


I think I would, perhaps I would...could you ask me again when I catch my breath.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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