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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-06-29 03:41 AM


In Between Land....

I'm traveling through silence
far into the unknown...
It seems so dark and aimless
so scared to go alone

Struggling through a land of thoughts
so difficult to leave
I need a helping hand so bad
too much to fear and grieve

And see there is my guiding Man
leading me each day
Without Him I am lost...
lost in every way

Now I have arrived with Him
together hand in hand
He brought me here to rest a while
In this in between land....



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (06-29-2002 05:08 AM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2002-06-29 03:43 AM


take your rest here at Passions!
I enjoyed your writing - brava!
Roniece

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2 posted 2002-06-29 05:13 AM


There you are!!

Wonderful to see you, Neeraja, and this is a beautiful introduction. I hope you like it here. I know that we are going to enjoy having you.

Welcome, my new Holland friend!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-29 06:51 AM



A lovely first post by which to enter the Land of Passions!  Welcome!  Please, Neeraja, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Nan
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4 posted 2002-06-29 07:20 AM


Wonderful - We LOVE our Dutch friends here at Passions... You folks are just sooooo good at writing in English - You keep the rest of us on our poetic toes...

Welcome to Passions..

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-06-29 08:45 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Wonderful first post!
I know you will love it here.
Please make yourself at home.
~Hugs, Nancy~

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2002-06-29 10:20 AM


Welcome to our humble home. It's wonderful to see you here! I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you. If you ever have any questions, please feel free to ask anyone, as you will learn, we are one gigantic family!
Neeraja
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7 posted 2002-06-29 12:51 PM


What a nice loving welcome... It feels like a soft warm blanket of love!  Thanks !!!  And also thanks for all the nice words about my poem!  It's very much appreciated!

sigh... this feels great!  

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8 posted 2002-06-29 01:55 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful debut, sweet friend, Yes, He will always show us the way and lead us all to everlasting joy and peace! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Neeraja, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles)  I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

    

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-29-2002 01:57 PM).]

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2002-06-29 10:10 PM


Hi Neeraja, I almost missed your first poem here. It's beautiful girl, glad you decided to join this family of friends.

I told you you will feel at home here.

Welcome, I know you write beautiful poetry and I know these poets will love to read it.

HUGS and Knuffels (I'll explain that to you some time) Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Honeybee
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10 posted 2002-06-30 11:24 AM



Welcome to Passions, Neeraja!

This is an inspirational first post, you really should enter it in a contest, it truly is wonderful!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

cherrypoptart
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11 posted 2002-06-30 03:36 PM


Wonderful post.
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12 posted 2002-06-30 03:43 PM


Neeraja~
Welcome to the wonderful Passions' circle of friends and poets~
You will find us a likable bunch ...
Wonderful entry into the circle~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2002-06-30 04:16 PM


I really enjoyed your first poem and look forward ot reading more of yoru work.  We have several other writers from the Netherlands that I enjoy.  I know you will like this forum and the quality of work within it.  Welcome to Passions Neeraja.

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

Goodknight
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14 posted 2002-06-30 04:33 PM


a very good first poem and welcome to Passions - look forward to many more - Paul
devina
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Cali
15 posted 2002-06-30 05:11 PM


Now this in between stuff is right up my alley!!!

Welcome!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Neeraja
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Posts 812
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16 posted 2002-07-01 06:11 AM


Thanks Noah... Titia (hallo again!) Melissa... Cherry... Marge... Mysteria... Paul... and Devina... for your nice and warm comments on my poem!  

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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