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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-28 11:16 PM


This is for my sister, Carla. I wish I could take every bit of your pain away little sis.I love you!

I'll be the rock on which you stand
If you can't quite see the road
When you're down and can't get up
I'd gladly bear your load

I'd lift the sun into your skies
When your world has turned to grey
I'll do my best to make you smile
And wipe your tears away

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-28 11:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, my heart too goes out to your sister Carla, sweet friend, let her know deep down she is loved by many and with such a loving brother like you I know she will smile having you near! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-06-28 11:38 PM


Kris, your sister is very fortunate to have a brother like you.
Very nicely penned.
~husg~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

shadow974
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3 posted 2002-06-29 12:09 PM


Very Caring and well written, Love it!

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

devina
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Cali
4 posted 2002-06-29 01:36 AM


I think you know the understanding we share within family love...

and the lil sisters are always the ones we tend to protect the most!!!

Heartfelt work here Kris...

go do your big brother duty!!!

Take care
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



1slick_lady
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5 posted 2002-06-29 01:43 AM


this is just beautiful
vandana
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6 posted 2002-06-30 05:41 PM


always enjoy reading your poetry looking forward for more
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