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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-06-28 07:25 AM


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© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-28 07:45 AM


Sandra,
I loved the style of this but would have liked to see the last word in a bow shape.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-06-28 01:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so sad, sweet friend, I know how you feel but believe me, very soon a rainbow will burst before your eyes and you will be that drop of water moist on true loves rose! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-28 01:56 PM


This is so pretty and so unique, Sandra...

~ rainbows full of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Sven
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4 posted 2002-06-28 04:26 PM


going along Kethry's lines. . . but, what about with each letter of "rainbow" a different color???

well done. . . you're reaching out here. . . I like it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-06-28 06:09 PM


LOL you guys, I have no idea how to make the colors different, or to make a rainbow shape.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-06-28 07:05 PM


I loved the trickle down effect of this, Sandra
it makes one feel.

hugs
M  

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-06-28 07:44 PM


Hello Sandra

This was lovely and so cleverly done.  I hope there is a pot of gold at the end of your rainbow filled with love and happiness.
I hope you are well.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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8 posted 2002-06-28 09:15 PM


Sandra...I love this piece, (and you), just the way it is!
~Hugs~

Duncan
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9 posted 2002-06-28 10:22 PM


Hell, I was impressed with the way the letters lined up!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

ctowen
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10 posted 2002-06-29 11:34 AM









!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Honeybee
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11 posted 2002-06-29 10:15 PM



Way cool, Sandra!  I'm lovin' this style from you

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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