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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-27 09:48 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-06-27 10:04 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart and keeper of the nights silvered light, Thank you for posting this burst of beauteous angels song, a heart lifting soul washing dream of musical wonder. It flows through my heart like liquid light, perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. This is truly special one of your utter best, do I not name you bringer of smiles and joy? Oh and yes beloved heart I love it, was there ever any doubt? No of course there wasn’t it is purely perfect poetry in image and words, utterly utterly perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-06-28 02:45 AM


Are you sure you're not an angel sent to make all of our days brighter?
This is so very beautiful and warm....like a pastel breeze.

Krishankins

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ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-28 03:33 AM


Marge
I have a hard time keeping up with you because you're such a prolific poet.
But I can't let this one flutterby me.
You're such an artistic whiz!

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2002-06-28 06:36 AM


Marge, you have a magical way of bringing butterflies to life in the heart! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Muys
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5 posted 2002-06-28 07:56 AM


oDEAR o DEAR
I AM OVERWELMT

tracie66
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6 posted 2002-06-28 08:07 AM


just breathtakingly beautiful, another fine inspiration...thanks Margie girl

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



cpalmer
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7 posted 2002-06-28 01:06 PM


Wow,
This makes my tummy full of warm fuzzy flutterbies!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs
Cindi

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-06-28 01:58 PM


Beautiful, Marge...

~ fluttery wings coming at you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-06-28 04:44 PM


So beautiful, so tender... this is perfect presentation. *S*
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10 posted 2002-06-28 04:59 PM


Eegads folks...she's done it again!!!

*big smiles* for you mum...

This is perfection...

love ya!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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11 posted 2002-06-28 06:19 PM


Oh Marge, I just love the way you do this. This is so beautiful.
Kethry
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12 posted 2002-06-28 06:36 PM


Margie,
this is stunning in presentation and concept.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2002-06-28 06:42 PM


Marge:  How delicate and elegant! Thanks for sending me the links to your poems!

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2002-06-28 06:45 PM


Dear Marge,  I've traced you to your lair.  Or is it web?  Love  Joyce
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15 posted 2002-06-28 06:50 PM


Marge,

I have always liked the word gossamer.  I have used it in a short dream essay, but have never had a chance to use it in a poem.  Now that you have I won't have too *S*
You do amaze me with the wide range of subjects, feelings and tempos your poems express.  Some of us get stuck sometimes writing poems that reflect our mood at the time.  If you do that your mood bounces around more that a basketball in a final four tournament.

Keep it up we love it....Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-07-03 04:35 PM


Friends ... DearestFriends~

Sometimes it comes so softly ...
that I barely hear the sigh~
Of my Mother's winging
caressing my thoughts
in her gentle flutterbye~

Thank you all from the heart of my little bottom~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2002-07-04 12:36 PM


Magestic writing... I love it...

regards to you Marge,
Sudhir

juliet_2u
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18 posted 2002-07-04 12:47 PM


Dear Marge, you never cease to amaze me. This is beauty at it's finest. I'm so glad I stopped in. Hugs, Jules
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19 posted 2002-07-04 01:25 PM


Marge

and now you, and your mother have reminded me of mine.  Thank you for that!

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2002-07-04 07:51 PM


Sudhir~
How wonderful to see you friend~
Thank you~

Juliet~
Oh my !  You've been gone far too long ...
it is beautiful to have you 'home'~
Thank you so much for coming by~

Martie~
Oh, sweetie ... I'm so glad~
Happy 4th to you dearest sis~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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