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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-06-27 05:53 AM



Not To Be Forgotten

Today I'll share my wishfor you
at this un birthday time.
I'll notice you through gloom and doom
and darkness plied in rhyme.

May all the days ahead that come
and those then left behind
bestow upon you, friendships hold
and wishes ever kind.


*Happy B Day*

MM


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-27 07:05 AM



How cute!  An "un"birthday wish...
Appropriate for most any occasion!
Clever, You!

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-06-27 11:32 AM


Maureen darling heart, wonderful writing, Happy birthday for yesterday, and you don’t look a day older darling girl. You know that this is truly fabulous, it flows along in absolutely divine flow, I love it utterly

Great writing, from a fabulous person, and to whomsoever the un-birthday wishes are may I always send them to you. Have a fabulous day

Excellent writing absolutely excellent x x

>
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-06-27 12:06 PM


Actually Karilea, my birthday is the  un one from yesterday and this poem is for the Professor, whose birthday is
today...Thank  you for the response

Thank you Marsha...I appreciate your
warmth

Always
M

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2002-06-28 07:18 AM


Well happy bday to both of you. Well done.
Sandra

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-06-28 08:42 AM


A very, merry un birthday to you...would you like some tea?...and sympathy.
Clever poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



vandana
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6 posted 2002-06-28 09:40 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-06-28 09:48 AM


Maureen,
Clever, enjoyed the read.

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