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jge84
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since 2002-06-27
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0 posted 2002-06-27 12:58 PM


Loneliness is the feeling,
That you get inside.
It's a horrible feeling,
That we all try to hide.

It's when there is no one,
To laugh or cry with.
In my honest opinion,
happiness is a myth.

I just want to lay down
In my room and die.
I can't shed one tear,
As I'm too sad to cry.

Why can't I find
Someone to love and care for.
I have lots of friends,
But I want something more.

All I want
Is to be there for someone.
To live and to die with,
And even have fun.

I have tried and tried,
And tried yet again.
But it seems in love,
I will never win.

I suppose I'll be alone
Forever and always.
Although I hope,
None of this stays.

So don't worry about me,
As I'll be alright.
I'll just be lonely
Night after night.

If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe.

© Copyright 2002 Joshua Grant Eastham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-27 01:13 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joshua, I can feel your heart crying, sweet friend, loneliness is something we all cope with one time or another, and I know it is not comfortable, but joy is inevitable and love will always find a way to you, you will see! (sigh) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joshua, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-06-27 12:25 PM


Sometimes it feels like the end of the world, doesn't it? I like your poem, it expresses the ache of loneliness well.  Cheer up, though. You can survive alone, I've done it for 20 years now.

Nan

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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3 posted 2002-06-28 04:53 AM


Lonliness is all in the mind, one day you will see that there are really many people around you who love you and care for you ... And don't forget it's very difficult to be lonely for very long when there are 12 billion people in the world - go out and meet them; one day you will meet the right one . Lovely poem, of the ones I've read of yours, this is my favorite .
L.of.L. Tom .
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