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Mya15
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since 1999-07-19
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0 posted 1999-08-10 01:09 AM


I heard this phrase on one of Celine Dions French albums but there were phrases that she used in the song that were just kinda thrown in there and I feel they could be put to better use in a short or long poem. Usually songs in other languages are supposed to be poetic and not make any sense when translated.... but you guys can do better right?

A quatre pas d'ici

A quater past here....
The key that locks the door is gone....
Can lost ever be found....

You can put them in seperate poem if you like.
Somebody wanna try???

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