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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-19 09:04 PM


In the Corner Pub - Kaile posted
a challenge involving a 4-Season Haiku ...
here is my attempt.

Frosty morning nips
Falling leaves of summer's end
Spring springs eternal

~*Marge*~



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1 posted 2000-06-20 07:11 AM


i knew it, Marge!staring in awe at your haiku right now cos it is just so beautiful....

seriously, you should post this in VoW...im sure you will get votes lots

have written this for you hope u like

Sparrow gets heatstroke~
Falling to the ground like leaf~
White snowflakes bury

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2 posted 2000-06-20 07:20 AM


Thank you, Kaile~
I love the inspiration I get just from thinking Haiku.
Thanks for the opportunity to stir my thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-06-20 09:40 AM


Marge,
  Another excellent Haiku, and a challenge well met!  Dennis :^)

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4 posted 2000-06-21 07:31 AM


Dennis~
Thank you ... I do like to Haiku !
~*Marge*~


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