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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Kit She is the swiftest of the swift Both physical and mental gift An aurora borealis With a wonderland of Alice She’s tenderness both sweet and fair Within her thoughts and what she dare And kissed my cheek that raised a lump That almost stopped my heart from pump. She’s days delight and Puck at night And writes in rhyme in sheer delight. I could not have a better friend To spend three days and have an end I am a tender soul myself And often store my wealth a shelf But this I’ll always keep my side This tender moment of abide. She too has opened up a door Twill never close forevermore. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
An aurora borealis With a wonderland of Alice She's tenderness both sweet and fair Within her thoughts and what she dare ================================== YES...shes a smile waiting to happen... and you have captured her charms well here me Stinkylove. "An aurora borealis With a wonderland of Alice and that will be the coolest analogy I will read all day.  and about these lines ...... And kissed my cheek that raised a lump That almost stopped my heart from pump. Randy wrote them didnt he? LOL  *winkiewinkie*   ... and I don't know why ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Sweet Tinkerbell, Of cource Randy wrote that line. He just insisted. But you know That you are my one and only.  WWRS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is simply exquistie.. I'm sure Kit will love it... You have her perfectly penned. ~TGIF Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To sit in a room full of Sy & Kit watching 'Deer and Mysteria battle with wit to hear a Sonnet of Liz and Nan's to hear Ruth swing rhyme as only she can I think I would have shadowed the sun to sit quietly, to just be one with all of the best in one great room to experience a forever of poetry in bloom Thank you for these treasures, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress It wasn't hard with such wonderful people. Thank you Sunshine, You deserved to be there you would have been hugged to death. Love Sy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, Your words are like crystal rain which falls blessing the drought and watering the arid places in this readers heart. Admittedly I haven’t got any arid places in my heart but that’s because I take a dose of Seymour at least once a day and often a lot more than that You have such a descriptive pen darling boy, you write and I can see the scene, the person animates and is living and breathing. YOU do work wonders with your pen love you really do. Absolutely wonderful exquisite writing, I love it.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and the jewels for the treasure box just keep coming Sy....thank you friend... Like a red brick, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, You are the fiddler on my roof and your comments are the proof. Gentle Spirit It's true, she is a jewel. Thank you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Awwww ... thank you Sy.  This is just beautiful, and I will cherish it always ... To meet the man behind the lines, Whose flowing verse is so devine, Was such a treasure I will hold, Forever, as the truth be told. It was such a treat talking with you about art Sy, and learning the analysis of personality through strokes and colour ... such memories and treasures I brought home with me. My doodles will never be the same. Thank you, for being you. You are as sweet and gentle as your words. Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (04-26-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Sy, this is an excellent tribute to Kit. You write the best of them! Yes, Kit is a wonderful and kind person. And she writes perfect poetry too  I would love it if one day, there was a passions gathering for all What a blst that would be!~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, LOL don't worry about the doodles. Now that you know the meanings you would change them anyway. We had a ball with all you lovely people and it's something I will remember a long time. Bless you dear. Melissa, You are a wonderful poet and one of my fovorites. Some day there will be that big meeting and what an affair that will be. Love Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...you've portrayed Kit's sweetness in these lines wonderfully. She was such a joy to meet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruth, It is one of my treasures and I guard it well |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Fortunate are those who find poet friends. Nice tribute, this. "Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor." e |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad True and thank you for the comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I hadn't already been a proud member of the Kit Fan Club, this poem would make me want to seek her out. *S* What a beautiful portrayal of a wonderful woman. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, So glad you and kit liked it. Thank you for the warm comment. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully breathtaking tribute to our wonderful Kit, sweet friend, she indeed is such a wonderful friend we are all so lucky to have and delights us every day with her contributions here! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I know she is always going to treasure this, sweet friend, this is superb, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-26-2002 08:14 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ Very lovely thoughts....nicely done....for a dear lady.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you for the read Noah and the beautiful comments. Lauren, She is a dear lady and one I've learned to love. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww, what a tribute! very special and beautiful, thanks for sharing your way of seeing her. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Passing Shadows, Glad this didn't get past you. Thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah you got our dear Kit to a "T", and I will not soon forget your analysis of why Kit and I both do exactly the same doodle and the meaning of the strokes for each of us. (Kit is more reserved and a thinker, and I am the creative, impulsive one!) Oh we so enjoyed you Sy, and this was a great poem for her. Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It would take a language not yet invented to do her justice but you come very close, Sy. Very nicely penned..  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, I can't believe I almost missed this gem about a Gem. Nice write and nice tribute. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Thank you very much and you are right about describing her. She is really something. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Yes she is a gem and I'm glad you got to read it. |
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