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In My Likeness
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In My Likeness |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The battle fought before the mirror Insight beyond the surface clearer The part of me that is most well The part yet found down deeper dwell The wonders shine so soft in him Inside the strength, beyond the grin The part of him that he trusts most The part yet seen that I hold close The bridges built the bridges burned In less be more, and more concerned The part of him shines bright in me The part unique of two we see The wishes gifted on silver plate In spirits lifted of grand estate The part of me he opens sweet The part of him that I complete Copyright Kkh 4/25/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD....your cadence in this poem is exceptional. The poem is exceptional as well...enjoyed. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
It is an inner struggle to admit, with confidence, who is whom and who wears the face. Amazing write, TD. Full of depth and originality. smiles bP |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great verse, Kathleen. Enjoyed the read. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderfully said! ((ThisDiamond)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ I so enjoyed this - 'The wishes gifted on silver plate In spirits lifted of grand estate The part of me he opens sweet The part of him that I complete' Just beautiful poetic thoughts of the heart~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond A wonderful poem to read and think about. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
this is the best I've seen from you, diamond lady...and it took a lot for that honor. Not only is the poem expertly crafted but the wording is exceptional  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"The bridges built the bridges burned In less be more, and more concerned The part of him shines bright in me The part unique of two we see"   WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I just love your language and originality you put in your words, sweet friend, this is a timeless dedication of true love! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you always build golden bridges to all your dreams, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  may love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
love the cadence and message here |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You have a gift you share it well! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone...I am truly honored by your compliment and generous thought. In my like-ness is about all that I like...as you see...I shared it here. Thanks again. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, this one needs to go round again I think! Yes, it's a great work! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with pasing shadows, this is a wonderful piece of writing M * I think I am following you this morning ps, as you bring forth some lovely poetry I missed the first go round. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. This is good |
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