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Whisper....I Love You....Softly
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Whisper....I Love You....Softly |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Lift my soul from this shell, hold me Take my heart from this beating chest Whisper that you love me...softly Hold me close....tell me all is best Take my tears, keep them in your eyes Take my memory...let it touch yours Close my lips, stifle all these cries tell me love is strong...and endures Let me feel the warmth of your touch as my lips lightly kiss your lids Say to me how we mean so much hug me, like two loving young kids Struggle, never let go my hand Tightly hold on, time tugs away Join me...as we journ shifting sands Whisper you wanted me to stay If I should stumble on the trail of life as we both walk our way Tell me that together we won't fail that you love me....ask me to stay [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-25-2002 07:29 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, you always write such sweet and heartfelt compassionate words of love that I know will always make your love feel like that special little girl again and together you are destined to walk that trail of life forever! (sigh) This is fantadtic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
When I read this my friend, I realized how much a man's heart can hold that few women get to know or see. What a wonderful work this is. ThisDiamond |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy, I’m completely awed by this delight. Oh how you write, and how much I love it when you do so. Phrases as elegant as only you know how to present them, flow like a clear stream of liquid light, words placed with the delicacy of a master confectioner places his sugared violets. This is utterly utterly divine. Purely magical darling boy, utter bliss  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry, Enjoyed the read tonight. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Stay!...such surrender..yet such beseeching romance..mmm..good stuff.. Sincerely, Reg |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Stunning! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sensitive, yes, that is the word for this...very very sensitive... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
words and thoughts we all want to hear from our loved ones, Barry. You say it well.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my goodness... this is a treasure! *S* I like it very much, Magnus... well written! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
would a sigh be enough....well done. Like a red brick, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Powerful. |
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