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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2002-04-24 09:41 AM


me and you are just ordinary men
like him and another with him

yes, we are all simple creatures
complexity devoid
much the same yet
we have this huge divide

a gaping hole that
is forever
threatening to widen
and to swallow what
us and them have stood for
all our lives

and then there are those
who talk as if they come from a place
higher, apparently detached,
as if the world revolves around them
demigods talking philosophy
giving lessons for living
while all us and them need is
food, water and shelter
without having to beg for it

sometimes i think
(if it comes to that)
i should cast a curse that all
those preachers turn dumb
and listen to their inner sounds
that shall tell them to
shut up for their own good
and for the good of us and them

then maybe us and them
could all be called ‘we’

© Copyright 2002 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2002-04-24 10:25 AM


I agree, some people act like there are barriers between them and the rest of us...but if they'd only see....good work Sudhir. Oh, by the way, it's nice to see you again.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-04-24 10:31 AM


Sudhir,
I've though the same thoughts, good write.

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2002-04-24 10:50 AM


Elizabeth and Seymour,

Thanks my friends
                 a lot...

regards,
sudhir

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4 posted 2002-04-24 11:12 AM


Very very true and well written Sudhir!
Enjoyed this morning.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2002-04-24 12:33 PM




(sigh) Yes, I too believe tat deep down we are all the same in some way and are only unique by our dreams and intuition, but should neevr be barb-wired by others doctrines! (sigh) This is powerfully provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-04-25 11:07 AM


Excellent write, Sudhir... We can wish and hope. *S*
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7 posted 2002-04-26 07:31 AM


while all us and them need is
food, water and shelter


If only....

Thanks,
Melton

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8 posted 2002-04-26 03:17 PM


yes. . . this is very well done my friend. . . you have found the right way to put it. . .and it speaks volumes. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2002-04-26 03:38 PM


This is very thought-provoking. Right things said in the right way..that's how it should be! Keep writing! And Namaste :-)
Neha

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10 posted 2002-04-26 04:18 PM


I'm a people-watcher, and I've seen it all too much. You are very observant Sudhir. I love the way this reads.
Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2002-05-21 09:38 AM


Thank you very much all of you...

Regards,
Sudhir

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