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Dancing In Silence
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Dancing In Silence |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Yesterday fades as day arrives Thoughts carried within hearts beating the musical love of their lives No longer playing, receding Left behind, the song now ended love rests silent within a chest Living lives apart, not blended doing what they both...know is best. Silence fills the rooms within walls for the tune has played, is quiet Soft steps no longer echo halls The menu of love’s new diet. Whispers once told of the fire’s heat as three words did make two hearts melt Once together and much complete Apart in silent prayer both knelt. Praying love would not them perish forever in hearts now alone. Lost in mem’ries they so cherish The silence of the line and phone. Words of rhyme so tenderly shared from the quills of two in love’s prance Wildly writing the words they dared letting love have...just one more dance |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The waltz or the tango...it is the energy that both put forth, and a magnificent dance. So well done as always, as the bar is lifted. Thank you. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When hearts sing, no other music is required...move those feet, this is lovely... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - this has to be one of your best. It has everything in it, well done... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, the tango too is my favorite dance, it has a lot of body movement and I just love to get up and pirouette! (big hugggssssss) May you always waltz to the beat of true love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy yet again you’ve written an absolutely gorgeous and terribly sad piece. The terrible thing is you do them so well so I can’t even say to myself no don’t read it. You make me cry so much darling boy and it’s really not fair you know, I look terrible when I’ve been crying, my face goes blotchy. As always darling boy it’s utterly utterly excellent. And yes I love it even if it did make me cry    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Very touching penning~ 'Whispers once told of the fire’s heat as three words did make two hearts melt Once together and much complete Apart in silent prayer both knelt.' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, I enjoyed Your words flow so nicely.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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