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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-04-20 10:03 PM


this was written by a former friend of mine who has just
slunk out..hehe


I love Garbidge.Garbidge is my cat, you see.
When Garbidge first came to me
His name was "Garfield".
"Garfield" never came to me.
"Garbridge", "Garwood" and "Catee"
did.Eeeee...
So Garbidge it was. And Garbidge it is.
And make sure you spell it
correctlee.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-20-2002 10:04 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-04-20 10:27 PM


Ecrivan, it it wasn't for the fact that the poem was written by your cat I would say you are trying to pull the wool over our eyes.
Beautifully deep poem. Ahh cats and their names.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



catalinamoon
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2 posted 2002-04-20 10:29 PM


Fun..tell kitty I said hi.
Sandra

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-04-20 10:32 PM


Martin,
Doesn't your cat have to post this? Hope they don't delete this! LOL Cute.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-04-20 10:47 PM


Ok, will do, cute name!!
Reminds me of a dog I had once called Jupiter,
but he answered to stupider!!

ecrivan
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5 posted 2002-04-21 12:02 PM


Keth

I love this beautifully written poem myself and so well inspired by a name, but no Garbidge didn't do it!


ecrivan
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6 posted 2002-04-21 12:04 PM


Blues,

And what happened to your cat?So you're able to identify with the crisis of not getting the name right in the beginning..hehe


ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-04-21 12:06 PM


Hey Sandra,

My friend's cat, who always comes up to me to say hello and knows I have low tolerance for long furred cats Glad you enjoyed.


ecrivan
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8 posted 2002-04-21 12:08 PM


Larry,

It would be nice if the poem is kept after all its a poem on  getting a name right


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