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rwood
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0 posted 2002-04-19 10:52 PM


There are some
that belong together
Like the river and the reed
One is strong, surging, sure
One is resilient and natural
against all odds

Together they sway and ebb
blending forth in current’s course
Sometimes the river overflows
and drowns the reed
Sometimes the reed must search deeper
within the drought ridden banks
Sometimes they are perfect
as a picture
with no words
only nature’s curse
necessary
to make them potent
to those of us who understand
that everything willing
to grow
to flow
will

straight through
Elysian fields


© April 2002
Regina Wood
For my friends..J & F..All my love.

[This message has been edited by rwood (04-20-2002 06:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-19 11:02 PM


An excellent observation and superb imagery, as always.  A painter of clouds comes to mind and the person the clouds were painted for.  Nice work, my friend.

Michael

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2 posted 2002-04-19 11:10 PM


Regina...being a fisherman....I always loved
rivers and reeds.....but now I have a whole
new perspective....a very tranquil and
touching one....  Thank You...

Krawdad
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3 posted 2002-04-19 11:17 PM


Just a bit of Gaia in action, perhaps.
Nice one, r.

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4 posted 2002-04-19 11:29 PM


A lovely and philosophic look through your eyes. Your writing is sterling, as always.

I just think I am a rebellious reed.

Stick around, will ya?

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5 posted 2002-04-20 01:41 AM


Reg,
I love natures allegories. And I love your observations. Karen, we must have the same roots! Thanks, Reg.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-04-20 06:17 AM


Very nice...James
rwood
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7 posted 2002-04-20 08:43 AM


Michael: You are wonderful to me..thanks so much for painting your thoughts for me.

Magnus: I love to fish too..and yess..tranquil rewards come with nothing is biting! Many thanks to you.

Krawdad: Gaia offers so much for us to live and love by..appreciate you.

Serenity: You are a lovely rebelious reed! lol...and one that is caressed by a river of truth. I hope to stick around always..Thanks for you.

Larry: The world around us says much more than we realize..thanks poet..you are so good to me.

James: So good to see you here..Appreciate your thoughts always..

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2002-04-20 10:28 AM


Separate identities, yet together hold so much meaning.
An excellent vision, flows with such gentleness.
Truly enjoyed, thank you.

VAS
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9 posted 2002-04-20 11:45 AM


love the flow and the imaging in here, nice message, well stated; the title pulled me in for the read, excellent choice and metaphor

think you want 'drought' rather than 'draught'

drought=lack of precipitation

draughts=checkers

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2002-04-20 01:36 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Regina, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the wonderful metaphors you put with your words! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love forever stand with the same strong roots always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2002-04-20 06:37 PM


rwood - you do write some very beautiful words...

BC

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