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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-04-18 10:14 AM


History's Cry

I can hear the voice's whisper
On the course of history's flight
Eyes record a vision crisper
Than the words on page of white

Pens have sketched an artist's picture
Of our ancestors of fame
Much more colorful and richer
Are the footsteps of a name

Witten records lead us halfway
Through their rippled looking glass
Walking on their weathered pathway
Brings to view the living past

In the mind's imagination
Within eye's insightful view
Out of tender heart's sensation
Someone's life is born anew

Standing on the edge of history
Of an old New England town
I can feel the joy and misery
Veiling ancient tombstone's crown

Only I have seen the stories
Floating off the written page
Words of deeds and phrase of glory
Yellow now with weathered age

Into history deeply mired
Voices fill a billowed sail
Sea gull is the new town crier
Centuries old his squawking tale

Elizabeth Santos
April 18,2002

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Nan
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1 posted 2002-04-18 10:21 AM


Liz, you give that squawking seagull outside my window a whole new light for me...You're wonderful, dear lady...
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2 posted 2002-04-18 10:25 AM



Share those stories, Lady Santos...you have just the quill and heart by which they will become reality again....

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3 posted 2002-04-18 12:19 PM


When Benedict Arnold was asked "What do you think historians will say of you?".He replied "They will lie".

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4 posted 2002-04-18 02:09 PM


Very well written - enjoyed. Chris

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5 posted 2002-04-18 03:19 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Elizabeth, this is wonderful, I too always know this strange feeling of nostalgia too, when I reflect on nature and how I wonder how they have envisioned the history of man unlike how we can perceive it! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-04-18 04:13 PM


ah yes. . . to see through the eyes of the poet in her natural habitat. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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7 posted 2002-04-18 04:38 PM


I am always in awe of the talent you possess.
Your poetry is always so flowing and expressive.  A true pleasure to read and enjoy.

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8 posted 2002-04-19 09:00 AM


In the mind's imagination
Within eye's insightful view
Out of tender heart's sensation
Someone's life is born anew

This is so very beautiful, Elizabeth... I'm so glad you see and hear and share. *S*

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