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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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 Reflections The reflection of her heart shines near the waters edge, tranquil and deep She cries for what might have been, as she lets her heart softly sleep Her soul wants one chance at the dream, but her mind knows best So all these foolish notions she lays quietly to rest Maybe if they'd have met in a different time, in a different place She could allow the chance to be touched by an Angel's grace In her heart, she knows she should just let all of this go Secretly her soul cries out though, but in her mind she knows It's time to just move on, and plant her feet back on solid ground Forget this fantasy love her heart has witnessed and found She's ruled many times in these matters with her heart This time though she has to find a way to let her head win, and make a soft depart When the years have passed, and the winds have shifted once more She'll no longer have broken dreams, they'll be restored So she can now fly on, no longer does this Angel need her to protect There's no more left to do here, nothing left to expect Then she looks at the water, and dries the last traces of her tears Knowing that this pain will be over, and they both can move on with the rest of their years She turns around to walk back the way that she came earlier that day All the while knowing that even though her head chooses to leave, her heart will always stay "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-18-2002 10:55 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Such wonderful reflections fill the mirrors of your heart, sweet friend, yes, may her heart be healed with love and then may her joy forever be reflected every time she stares into the lake with her loves face embroidered beside hers! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is outstanding writing you KNOW I love this it is utterly utterly wonderful. The flow here is utterly divine, wonderful wonderful writing. This as are all of your writing truly fabulous and I absolutely love it. This is a fabulous and superb example of your nature. I’m sitting here giving you a spontaneous round of applause, and saying this is fabulous. Very well done   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Amy I hear and reflect upon your every word. Tis lovely with a tinge of regret and the strength to carry on. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-18-2002 12:54 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Then she looks at the waters drying the last remain of her tears Knowing that this pain will be over, and they both can move on with the rest of their years Turning around to walk back the way that she came earlier that day She knows even though her head chooses to leave, her heart will always stay ===================================== some things never leave us... somethings we take with us...while leaving traces behind. Beautiful cadence kissed write Amy-girl  a lovely retrospective piece. heart-hugs jm how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes... the heart always goes where the mind wishes it could stay. . . wonderful Amy. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Aimster - very beautiful writing. Very touching to me. And the photo is a place where I need to be right now, it looks so peaceful and serene... BC |
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