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Moon of Darkened Sky
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Moon of Darkened Sky |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Whence will moon of darkened sky rise and caste glow of night into view of two in wrest of passion’s sighs upon the lawn in soft renew. Doth not the chill of skin once then abate from feel and sight from beam while ways of gents desire to win the glow of face in sensuous gleam My lust for thee art surely strong and cloud the mind of chivalry The night is right and ride is long Wilt thee remain, be once for me Thy quest to keep a virtue true shall not be cast into the light as lips desire to feel the dew thy thirst remains till once is right. Thee art lady of treasure pure A gem most rare desired to keep Lie in thee bed alone endure I guard, I keep thy soul in sleep |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh good sire, a gem wilt thy be to but travel in the pouch of thee wish but emerald eyes and ruby lip and golden chalice from which to sip all thy treasures before thee, lay no price too great, your fee to pay |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
gotta love it : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done Sir. . . thou hast indeed penned a tale of wonder and light. . . I raise my sword to thee Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Penned with such grace and beauty  I adored it, I mean who wouldn't fall for those words of chivalry *swoons*Kristen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Surely I wouldst take thee up upon this If it was for me Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Thee art lady of treasure pure A gem most rare desired to keep Lie in thee bed alone endure I guard, I keep thy soul in sleep"  WOW!!! Yes, yes, I love how you depict her love in her heart like the brightness through even the most ebony of darkness, I love it! (smiles) May she always be your North Star and help find you peace always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...oh my. BIG SIGHS!! ~Hugs for this one~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows of crystal streams of living light, flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling man this is utterly utterly perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry My feet still haven't touched the ground after reading this masterpiece! Beautifully written by a gallant gentleman. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ I always enjoy reading you~ The title is scrumptious as well~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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