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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-08 01:17 PM



whispers
are uttered
somewhere in the distance

I feel them
bathing my skin
with titillation
my heart
with caresses
that leak weeping
into pools
in my eyes

maybe
I’m just tired
but it seems
as though
somewhere
out there
tender hearts
touch with gentle
soft-spoken words
words
that are free for all to use

even me
but
here is the only place
in which I have
to speak them
with cyber ink
on cyber parchment
for cyber eyes
and hearts
to see,
hear,
accept,
don, as though
blossoms of love
spilled upon the page

or
reject
with
deleted thought
erased memory

and I can only ponder
only guess
what your choice
may have been

ego
or id
which shall I use
to carry away
my decision

©April 8, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-08 01:21 PM


VAS,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-04-08 02:55 PM


Try libido
Wonderful write, Virginia.
From one cyber-heart to another, I loved this

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2002-04-08 02:58 PM


well, then, "I."
I think I love your cyber heart!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-04-08 10:43 PM




(sigh) This is indeed very thought-provoking, sweet friend, sometimes some whispers can be nothing more than a sirens deception but there will always be soft delicate ones we can always allow to touch our hearts! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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