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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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I drip some thoughts onto the page and soon they become a trickle They bleed there way down the paper now flowing just a little It takes awhile to break the dam but sooner or later it comes My thoughts pour out without control And I gasp knowing I'll lose some. Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi SmittenKitten-- Loved your poem--I journal also, to find out what I am really thinking and get frustrated because I can't capture it all. You expressed this so well. Shenachie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Made me smile you did...I think we can all relate--nothing, nothing, and then whoosh! It all comes out in a rush and you can't catch it all--er, we are talking about WRITING, aren't we?  Warm hugs, kitten! (It was good for me too!)  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
lol @ Serenity. Yep, sometimes my fingers can't keep up with my thoughts and I lose three more thoughts trying to remember one. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely written, SmittenKitten. Sometimes those thoughts just dribble away. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SK, That has nothing to do with age, right? I'm worried! Nice job here.serenity - hahaha It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ As poets we surely do all know the story of the 'one that got away'~ I think I'll start using a net ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Duncan, I like the way you put it *s..and SK this was very nice M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Krista, I know how you feel, I always have all these thoughs that come out sometime but then I have no way of writing them down, so then I say "Oh no, what do I do?" (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always write the most wonderful words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Ms Smitten... or is the Ms Kitten... or perhaps Ms Kitty.. ( chuckling) enjoyed the way it captures the trickle then the flow of ideas and writing... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Krista hi there, this is really lovely writing, it flows with such a lovely soft flow. Could this be any smoother? I don’t think so, excellent writing. Well done You are a fine, a very fine writer   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy  And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I have the same experience often. Enjoyed this. Sandra |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Shenachie~ It is frustrating....but at least we're actively seeking out our thoughts. Just think how many we'd lose if we never wrote in the first place! SereneGirly~ Hehe, you are a naughty one, you! I'm glad it was good for you too though that's my goal.Duncan~ Hehe, exactly! Midnitesun~ We need buckets to collect them in and then we can take them out at our leisure! Although I suppose our memories are that bucket....but if that's the case, my bucket is full of holes! BearyLarry~ Hehe, I hope not! Who knows what'll happen to me if it's started already! And you're definitely right, it's never too late! Marge~ My thoughts swim in and out of sight as I chase them with a net a beautiful one turns to smile at me it's the one I wanted and didn't get! M~ Yeah, Duncan sums it up just right =) thanks for stopping in! SweetNoah~ You seem to catch all your most beautiful thoughts no problem Cat Hair~ hehe, all three work for me! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed! Krissy~ Thanks a bunch for your lovely thoughts! Sandra~ I'm glad when someone can relate...thank you for popping in and visiting. Hugs to all of you!  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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