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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-04-15 05:31 AM

we walk there with the morning
in our cove of dreams
where the ocean has warm hands
and watches with her eyes closed

where the stones are smooth
and have soft bellies
that giggle with pleasure
at our feet touching

and the trees are violins with voices
that know the wind as their bow
they sigh songs of love dancing
and sway their limbs as fingers in worship

our shadows lean into the sun as separates
then blend as one on the sand canvas
we are entwine of dark shapes
our tremble makes sand valleys there

we shimmer black rocks that wake to our laughter

©Dark

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-04-15 06:21 AM

Interesting...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-04-15 06:54 AM

That is a beautiful way to wake up....just like this....very, very good....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-04-15 07:29 AM

and the trees are violins with voices
that know the wind as their bow
they sigh songs of love dancing
and sway their limbs as fingers in worship
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you play poetry like that violin poet sir....and your poetry has become part of my morning.

The imagery and personafication in this is superbly and softly done...like a sigh on the cheek.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-04-15 08:38 AM

very nice imagery and the flow is superb..aain you capture a moment and a scene, lay it gently on the readers mind and leave them wanting more..

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2002-04-15 08:49 AM

"where the stones are smooth
and have soft bellies
that giggle with pleasure
at our feet touching

and the trees are violins with voices
that know the wind as their bow
they sigh songs of love dancing
and sway their limbs as fingers in worship"

I love those images! You see nature in a way that I always dream to. I love this so much, I'm keeping it

Keep 'em coming!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-04-15 08:56 AM

Morning Dark...
I look forward to awakening
with my smile eyes
watching you.
Incredible way...
with words you have!
~Morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-04-15 08:58 AM

Dark Stranger
Well done, enjoyed the read.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-04-15 09:02 AM

I know you know this one is superb, and the lines....

"where the ocean has warm hands
and watches with her eyes closed"

"our shadows lean into the sun as separates
then blend as one on the sand canvas"

like those and like everyone else, the tree part....lol I like ALL of it!! Good Morning....

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-04-15 10:29 AM

DS

I enjoyed the walk with your eyes this morning....thank you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2002-04-15 01:26 PM

James, thank you sir, I appreciate your eyes.

Sunshine, thank you for the good morning smile..and wink

Janet Marie, you bless me as an old friend
with your morning eyes..thank you

Cpat, I look forward to your reviews, thanks

SmittyKitty, slow hugs to your gentle woman

Enchantress, you enchant, you sooth, you smile my thoughts

Sy, thank you most gracious friend

SEA, wear my places in your mind with a smile, thank you

Ms Martie, wish I was there instead of here..(lol) but I was in my thoghts..thank you

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-04-15 03:21 PM

"our shadows lean into the sun as separates
then blend as one on the sand canvas
we are entwine of dark shapes
our tremble makes sand valleys there

we shimmer black rocks that wake to our laughter"

(smiles) You always write the most incredibly sensual pleasant words, sweet friend, I too envisioned this seashore-like vision reading this, this is gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2002-04-19 10:28 PM

Once again, you have an amazing way with words! This is gorgeous in every way. And, It's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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