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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-13 07:02 PM



Grandma's Poetic Serenade

~*Marge Tindal*~



She is the pink within my ink
my very favorite shade
She is the rhyme of heart-songs
Grandma's poetic serenade~

I sing soft lilting La-La-La's
into her dainty ears
She smiles her sweet contentment
that moves me near to tears~

Forever will I be thankful
she came to this heart of mine
Joy-beyond-compare she is
this little Delaney divine~

When she clasps my finger
in her tiny little hand
My heart beats with the rhythm
of love so GRAND~

~*~


*From a contented Grandmother
to my little Delaney Makay Tindal
God, how I love you~

March 12, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-13 07:07 PM


You know, Marge...I think you must be the template for a perfect grandmother!
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2 posted 2002-04-13 07:09 PM


Duncan~
*hugs* .. If LOVE can make it 'perfect' ... then I'm overdosed ~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2002-04-13 07:21 PM


Oh Marge, you look so happy and content sitting their holding that little princess. She's gotten bigger since the last picture I saw of her. What a cutie patootie!

Oh, I like the poem too! GaGa over Delaney.  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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4 posted 2002-04-13 08:11 PM


Marti~
Oh hon ... I just spent two glorious days baby-sitting that little angel .. she was TWO MONTHS old yesterday ..... too quickly she's growing~

What a heavenly delightful two days~
Thank you for sharing a Delaney moment~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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5 posted 2002-04-13 08:16 PM


Ahh Marge..you look so happy..
and Delaney so peaceful.
You are so blessed.
Lovely heartfelt write..
Thanks for the update and pic.
~Hugs, Nancy~

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6 posted 2002-04-13 09:00 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. I can hear the soft and gentle cradle-song from your perfect grand ma’s heart. Beautiful peaceful delightful picture Margie girl. Simply superb writing and beautiful presentation.

You know I love it don’t you? Fabulous writing darling heart


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-04-13 09:56 PM


yanno, I'm available for adoption....and I would make a wonderful grandson!

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8 posted 2002-04-14 08:51 PM


Enchantress~
Oh ... it's just the greatest kind of happy~
Thanks gal~

MarshaLove~
Awwwwww, you're a sweetie~  Thank you, my friend~

Balladeer~
Hmmmmmm, I'm a'thinking that I'd better just say ...
Awwwwwwww, thanks~
Tee-Hee ....~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-14-2002 08:53 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-04-14 09:44 PM


Yes Grandma Marge, they do grow up awful quick. She is so adorable.
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SmartChick~
Thank you, my friend~
She's some kinda LOVE~ ~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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11 posted 2002-04-14 10:39 PM


Nothing better than holding your grandbaby - the love just BURSTS out of your eyes Marge!!


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12 posted 2002-04-15 09:54 AM


PoetdeVine~
Ohhhhhhhhh .... you got that right !
She's such a delight ... such a precious delight~
Thank you for enjoying her with me~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2002-04-15 02:47 PM


I knew just where to go for my afternoon dose of warm and cuddlies. *G* So much love pours from your words, Marge... I can only imagine the tenderness Delaney finds in your arms and the stories your la-las sing to her. *S* This is a perfect 10 on the awwwwwwwwwww scale. *S* Beautiful poetry, beautiful picture... beautiful. *S*
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SweetSuthernGal~
You give me the biggest SMILE ...
Thank you sweetie .... oh, yes ... she is just the most precious little 'inspire' of my heart~
*HUGS*

P.S. I owe you an e-mail ... it's forthcoming~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-04-16 01:47 AM


This was so beautifully written
and she is an adorable gift
grandma is extra special too
Hope

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16 posted 2002-04-16 01:52 AM


Marge,
I don't know who is luckier...Grandma or Delaney Makay! Delightful poem and thanks so much for the fabulous picture. Awesome. to you and one for the baby

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Hope~
Oh ... I think we're both just SO lucky~
Thanks hon ... she's a joy to share with my friends~

Larry~
Aw shucks ... thanks ... my baby is just soooooo adorable~  She fills this lady's heart with such overflowing joy~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2002-04-16 09:08 AM


Marge, this is so sweet. Every day I try to write about my Savanna, and it sticks on the paper, I can't sy the right words that are not too goofy with love. You did well.
From one "mimi" to another.
Sandra
PS, aren't we the youngest, cutest grandmothers anyone ever saw? LOL

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