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Field of Green
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Field of Green |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Field of Green The moning haze is lightly spread Across the meadow’s April bed Beneath the mist a field of green And woodland’s edge soon to be seen Behind the cloud of foggy dew A white tailed deer within my view A frilly fringe of purple lace Of redbud’s spattering limbs of grace And just beyond this field I’ve known An ancient barn of granite stone Will soon appear when morning haze Dissolves into remembered days And brings to view as crystal clear As childhood memeories held so dear A field of green in early morn A place where many dreams were born Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (04-13-2002 04:39 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I just love meadows so much, sweet friend, whenever I visit the mountains I always love to just lay in the meadows where daffodils and Indian paintbrushes bloom! (kiss on cheek) This is a rainbow of inspiration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, What ever your doing is good for you. Your writing is superb. Love Sy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth...this is soooo beautiful! Full of wonderful images... and very calming to read. Enjoyed this so much this evening. Hugs. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How clearly I stood in the meadow and I thank you for that beautiful picture. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can see the ancient barn...this is wonderful, Lady Santos...good to see you writing again... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There will be a white-tailed deer in your vision real soon!  Once again, beautiful writing, Liz... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Gentle and beautiful. I enjoyed this.  ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Elizabeth...You are the QUEEN of rhymed verse. GORGEOUS POEM!!!! Expertly rhymed. ***Ivy Rose |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Once again, you pen a poem of beauty and grace. I just love the delicate way you write.  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shhh. . . I can see it. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Forever and always will I think of redbuds as purple lace... because of you and your magical words. *S* This is lovely, Lady Santos... I enjoyed very much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ Beautiful imagery as always~ LOL @ BallaDEER~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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