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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 09:20 PM

A Lifetime With You

It seems like
another world
another lifetime
when we were two.
I remember thinking
all my troubles
would soon be over
because I was going
to spend the rest of my life
with a beautiful woman
such as you.
Sad to say
it didn't work out
exactly that way.
And now I only have
these memories of you
to see me through.
Sometimes I wish
I could live my life
all over again
but do it a lot better
the second time
that I passed through.
And than perhaps you would
let me stick around
and I could spend
a lifetime
with you.

JamesLee
June08
2002
forBeth
DaysPast

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-08 09:30 PM

That was just beautiful. I would like to read more of yours.

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

2 posted 2002-06-08 09:49 PM

James hi there Your writing is incredibly beautiful carrying within it an indefinable quality that shows the worth of love and speaks of its loss so well. YOU are incredibly talented. Your writing is incredibly descriptive and well presented and when you write with your hearts ink you surely shine.

This is superb writing, and it will stay with me for I’m keeping this special treasure piece of yours.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2002-06-08 10:27 PM

James, this is BEAUTIFUL! I have been really enjoying your work and feel fortunate to have been able to view them. Great write and I love the title as well!

Hope all is well!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-06-08 10:41 PM

JamesMichael~
You write the 'missing' .... soooooo well~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-06-09 12:41 PM

This is beautiful, James....I am so sorry that you are missing her, though....
Maybe soon you will find someone else to take away your pain...I hope so.

~ poetfriend hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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