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Silent are....... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Silent Are.... Silent are the berry bogs Dark, the fragrant room Groggy are the nighttime frogs Soft, the crescent moon Silent is your voice tonight Sparkling are your eyes Billowing ,the harbor mist Clouding mystic skies Joyful is my sleeplessness Memorizing time Moments of enchanting bliss Gathered in my mind Let my lover’s slumber drift Into a dawning beam Soft purples of the haze will lift The blanket from his dream Silent is my tranquil breath Still, my waiting heart Soft my head upon his breast That murmurs in the dark Cool ,the breeze from window’s space Pure, the hour of bliss Wet, the lips that now awake The fire in his kiss Never has the spirit been to Places such as this Exquisite is the free fall into Passion’s sweet abyss Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (06-07-2002 06:00 PM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very romantic, and beautifully said. Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, and may your waiting heart be fulfilled with true loves beauty and stillness, sweet friend, this is soooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-07-2002 08:05 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Mmm getting all warm inside from this beautiful rhyme. Sigh... sigh...what a poetess you are Liz Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang girl, another summertime chiller...soon to heat the hearts of many.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your talent shines brightly, Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful summer read Elizabeth. ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Joyful is my sleeplessness Memorizing time An amazingly beautiful poem, Liz... maybe memorizing time is a good thing to do when you have insomnia. Its better than counting sheep.  ~ insomniac hugsLyra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzieLady~ Delicately beautiful lacing of thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Liz...this one not only whispers of passion, it shouts of it in its words. How utterly magnificent this piece is. Definately one of my favorites of yours though I do have so many of those. Absolutely loved it!!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This certainly paints a peaceful silent picture......saturated with the sensual mood of the moment! Oh so nice Elizabeth! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
This is stunningly well done. Deep thoughts expressed exquisatly(sp) with perfect words. Very good work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I can only repeat Balladeer on this one. Sy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz, love the flow of this....and 7/5 works very well...Me thinks I will give that a try...thanx for another beauty.. |
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