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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-06-06 11:38 AM

cold
Its amazing how I can smile
when eyes pass me in appreciation
following me until I'm out of sight
while they wait on mine to turn around.
I can be numb to all attention
or my vulnerability could be in plain sight.
Its just that I'm being careful these days
because all eyes seem to add up to love's hold.
I never could endure the math.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-06-06 12:46 PM

I'm sorry you are feeling so vulnerable these days.

I like the ending, about not being able to do the math. Well done, Temptress.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-06-06 04:20 PM

I've always found that there's only one equation that matters. . .

have I mentioned that it's good to see your work here again???

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-06-06 04:22 PM

From out of the depths of the hurting heart comes the pain of reality and the indications are so intense...........Like a whitewash of the mind the thoughts become like those seeking baby's milk before maturity to solid foods again!
Good write!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-06-06 07:11 PM

Temptress darling girl this is a powerful emotive piece of writing, truly outstanding. The beauty and divinity the wondrous depth of heart’s vulnerability you show it so well. Your writing shines darling heart it really does. Do I love this? Tell me what do you think?

I love it utterly utterly this is exquisite writing

:loveya

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-06 09:43 PM

(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Jenn, I'm so sorry to hear this, sweet friend, it is indeed so very hard to trust someone or understand someone from deep down nowadays, I know, but I also know you are destined to find true happiness for you are a very strong-hearted and loving person and I know you will find what you desire! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-06-06 10:18 PM

Vulnerability shines like a beacon....it radiates from the inner being. It's smart to be careful during that time.......

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