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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-06-06 11:23 AM



on the wings of my dreams
you take me into the night
and show me how it could be
if I make my choices right

on the wings of my dreams
I have no trouble to choose
but in the awakening of morn
it's in doubts that I loose

on the wings of my dreams
you show who I could be
when making right choices
my soul will be set free

on the wings of my dreams
I flow on 'could be' clouds
you take care of my mind
when I am lost in doubts


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (06-06-2002 01:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-06 12:20 PM


Titia, this is so beautiful...
I love the feelings here...
Enjoyed this read today.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-06-06 12:21 PM


Tita darling girl what a delight it is to read your writing. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it.

The depth of the moment is encapsulated in this brilliant jewel of writing. In other words I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-06-06 12:22 PM


Titia~

'on the wings of my dreams
I flow on the 'could be' clouds'


In my dreams, I can fly ... I can fly~

BEAUTIFUL poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Muys
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since 2002-04-06
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4 posted 2002-06-06 01:29 PM


Sometime I dream about my computer.he is very sad of me, he said
I tease him and than i must say
70 times

Stupid Lady stupid lady
Some time I hate him.
your Mom

I am mad I am not stupid  

[This message has been edited by Muys (06-06-2002 01:35 PM).]

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2002-06-06 01:43 PM


Hi Nancy Lee, glad you enjoyed it

Mushi, you give me too much credit dear, but you may say that to me all the time sweetie LOL

Marge, got inspired by a first line of a Dutch song I heard on the radio this afternoon.

Mom, he he, got mad then did you!! I can picture you right there, because I know you when you're mad LOL
But don't you worry, I'll show you again and again to get those smilies in sight.
See, you came along fine with size and colors already. KNUFFEL

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Muys
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6 posted 2002-06-06 03:13 PM


KISS
TITIA
I LOVE YOU

[This message has been edited by Muys (06-06-2002 03:47 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-06-06 03:22 PM


Titia,
Some dreams can be controled. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-06-06 09:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, yes, always follow your dreams for you are a very loving person and I know all your dreams will come true as long as you hold them close! (kiss on cheek) This is filled with the grace of your golden heart, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-06-06 10:32 PM


Titia is writing beautiful poetry and Muys learned the smilies....the Dutch are taking over the world!!!!!

That's great!!

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