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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
{}insight Dimly the word came through dusk dark sinsight whispered a winsome spark sinsight, I thought perhaps I’d heard sinsight, a most curious word surely the shush of s was slip of lip or fingertip? Did it mean what it gleamed within the light soft sinsight sounds just like a dream. Surely this word I’d heard was imminent, a soft approach, no repent, impending stays, on its way, coming near, close[r] dear, just now about to happen within my reach somehow… but soft the s stayed my tongue sinsight as if it belonged sensing me in curve of s something soft of sweet caress sinsight lingers in my mind some place where I’d likely find the thought of you in tremble’s touch sinsight of me just stuff and such… so as my mind plays the word perhaps the s is one you’ve heard sinsight now shall linger long in your mind where I belong… |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Deca...such a sinsightful write from such a talented poetess..oops, must have been a slip of the lip.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo sensually delightful, sweet friend, I love it, your words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sinful acumen? Sacumen ... naw ... in my mind ... not sinful at all ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like what Magnus said...."sinsightful" Very intense write, good reading! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sin in sight??? or, perhaps, seeing through sin. . . or. . . well, you get the idea. . . great work my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca!! I tried ever to hard to say the words softly... so why is my keyboard all wet? Just kidding....whis is one terrific write coming from one terrific lady!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dimly the word came through dusk dark sinsight whispered a winsome spark sinsight, I thought perhaps I'd heard sinsight, a most curious word surely the shush of s was slip of lip or fingertip? ===================== but soft the s stayed my tongue sinsight as if it belonged sensing me in curve of s something soft of sweet caress ======================== so as my mind plays the word perhaps the s is one you've heard sinsight now shall linger long in your mind where I belong ====================== s... yes--s.. s-- for smiling.... for I am *smiling at you* ... just smiling and smiling and smiling.... and you know why. Dear Decca...dont stay away so long  OH and? ......... (IWIHWT)!!!!!! (still smiling)  When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed this play on sinsation of such sinsearly enjoyed it |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Loving it...deca sure knows how to flow doesn't she? just wonder if you should italicise it so much though? Have you tried it in standard font?  K |
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