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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"he loves me..." so I hug myself I lap his words with eager tongue "I love you" dance release of hell-- (he loves me) and I come undone... |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
Yes I know this, I do! Beautiful Luscious  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your critique line is too funny!!! Enjoyed the poem...must explain why I'm hugless.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
BIG SPANKING HUGS THEN!!!! and what are ya doing up? tell me yer okay...? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Give yourself a hug for me too! I hope your release from hell wont still your pen! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't love GR8? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'll just ditto Interloper. And I'm not touchin' that critique line, much as I'd like to...lol. I'm falling even more in love with you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, may his declaration of love forever echo to your heart and bring rapture to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
captured so well. . . I like it. . . oh, and I've got the paddle ready (if I should ever need it. . .)  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario |
Beautifull write love is truly a great thing You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I read a lot of words from you my friend, read between many a line, rephased a few in my head, fell warm and huggy with some, immensely sad with others, but this few short one you penned, say more than all the others combined. I jealous of your talent, my New Orleans siren. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you all---and j? warm hugs for your loveliness! and I thought this was too short--but then? time together always is...when it's like THIS. LOVE YOU GUYS...YOU'RE THE BEST!!! |
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