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A Collection of Trite
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A Collection of Trite |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Your words no longer have their play on me. What use to wrap around and drown me in the safety of its grip, its strength of feel overwhelming, has become commonplace, a collection of trite, so obvious that the rareness once thought has become the see-through glass on my other side. I look for the freshness of another, original in feel, each touch garnering a piece of a puzzle. One day he shall have it all, the final patch of me, to comfort him a quilt of time, patience, caring obtained through mutuality... a loving respect, one thing you have yet to conquer. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Each of our experiences contributes to Who we Are... I hope your friend learns and grows from your friendship as you have...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Actually, while this was intended, I believe, for a love affair, it also speaks well of any relationship of man to man, woman to woman, when friendships go awry... I have a friend who needs to look at this. I think I shall send it to her... Thank you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alicethruglass And what a lovely blanket that will be. Enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliceThruGlass~ I like your quilting party~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
thank you all...this was not meant for a love affair but was intended just to express a feeling that arises when one believes in a once stated unconditional friendship but realizes that it was one sided after all... whether online or in real. I appreciate your responses ~A~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Alice darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. I love I love it utterly utterly. That questing thought, that uncovering of deceit when respect is lost through not understanding someone’s motives. This is exquisitely written darling heart, absolutely exquisite. I had a relationship like this once, where I believed everything I was told and then discovered that I’d been fed on misdirection and falsehood, it leaves a very strange taste in your soul. And what is worse makes you doubt not just others but yourself. Luckily I found faith and hope again but many don’t. truly this is excellent writing You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do. Absolutely perfect writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Alice, this is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I think many experiences and relationships are all successfully determined on this element of trust and contribution and the heart to respect mutually! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Well-said, Alice. Shenachie |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
i totaLly love this poem. it really brings out the message |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The first stanza and the last line of the second stanza were my favorite parts. Enjoyed. |
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