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Ode to Savanna
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Ode to Savanna |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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For my Granddaughter She wears a flower in her hair and subtle smile upon her lips A lovely face of purity a glass of lemonade she sips. She's only five years old right now with wisdom far beyond her years She understands me very well her hugs can wipe away my tears. She's like a delicate pink rose but so much more, she does not fade She has such sweetness in her heart this precious child my daughter made. She's just an angel from above who's added to my life so much I'll love her through eternity this little girl with heaven's touch. If anyone would like to see her picture, scroll towards the bottom of my family page http://www.geocities.com/stournas/familypoems.html [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (06-01-2002 11:39 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat...watch out...they grow up as quick as our own did...my little angel, Morgan is now ten...and I don't know where the time went with her, either... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, this is a lovely write for what seems a wonderful grand daughter, enjoy the early years as they pass so quickly. Love is there to find and share. Take care, enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Awwww, this is so sweet Sandra. What a precious little angel she is. They’re so cute at that age aren’t’ they? My niece is a little older than this now, but still brings me such great joy. You should have put a picture of her in this post, so we could all see her. Though, I’ve seen the pictures of her on your home page, and all of your granddaughters are adorable. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sandra ... this is just wonderful! What a beautiful tribute to both your grandaughter and to your daughter ... I just loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You're a grandmom? How? Look at you! LOL... Sandra - I love the innocence in this...it's refreshing...a very nice read right now..  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ My heart smiles at the beauty of your thoughts ... Savanna is sure to create many more special ink-moments to fall from your pen~ This is so lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree with Severn, you a grandmother?? I bet you are a great one Sandra. Hugs to you, and man.....do they grow up quick!! Like a red brick, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, you're a grandmother?? Great fun eh? This is just so charming... as Savanna must be as well. Love that name!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww. I love this, sweet friend, your love for your sweet granddaughter shines in this gorgeous poem, I know she will always be blessed to have such a loving grandma like you! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're a young looking grandma! Hey this is a sweet poem and you're a sweet poet and I bet she can get just about anything she wants out of you hey gram? Nicely done I really enjoyed it! |
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GypsyRose New Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 8Oklahoma |
Oh what a lovely poem. Granddaughters are so special. And, they grow so fast. Just like our children did. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May she bring lots of warm moments to your heart...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely poem for your beautiful grandaughter, Sandra....I looked at the pictures and all of them are so adorable. You must be a very young grandma!  ~ granny hugsLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
well congrads on being a grandmother..enjoy the grandkids while their young! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Loved this, Sandra. I've got a friend with a new baby, named Savanah. I'm falling even more in love with you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sandra enjoyed this piece, you do your word dances so well |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sandra This feeling is one I am learning to treasure...I have a special teacher. A sweet read! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: if only we could keep that wisdom when we grow older. . . we can, can't we?? wonderful Sandra. . . and very special. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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