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RESISTANCE is futile
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RESISTANCE is futile |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You, standing there with that little boy grin and eyes twinkling with mischevious. I pretend not to notice while inside my shy wants to become the she from evenings of passion. You capture me, held in lovers gaze and once again I realize that RESISTANCE is futile.... Like a red brick, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, Very well done GS...loved it all the way through... jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WONDERFUL....it is so good when there is no point to struggle against love....I LOVE THIS....thank you...hugs... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! Donna, this is terrific! I love this style... FANTASTIC! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LORNA New Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 2johannesburg SOUTH AFRICA |
SMASHING POEM!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE...THEY ARE INSPIRATIONAL!!! WELL DONE YOU CANT LOSE WAT YOU NEVER HAD!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such lovely and striking poems that always make me smile and inspire us all! (kiss on cheek) May love always take you with a charm, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This was too good! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ack! i hope it doesn't ruin your beautiful poem that i mention the Borg... i had to! i'm sure you know that though.  Chris[This message has been edited by Christopher (06-01-2002 02:30 AM).] |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
oooh - i like the sound of this! *g* esclandre Je le Rêve, je Pleure |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The way it should be.... a wonderful read! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh yeah! There's only one way to put that fire out...well simmer it anyways..hehe. Love and huggies somy~ Sincerely, Reg |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You’ve gotta love a feeling like this. Lost in the love…yep, no point resisting….it’s going to take you there anyway!!! Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderfully emotive write Donna! You've captured this feeling of resistance so perfectly. Very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah,I like this, it feels just right. Sandra |
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