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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-05-31 07:29 AM


Fly with Me

I would you with me when I ride
The moon that motivates the tide
Wear the silver jewels of light
And dance with me throughout the night.

Sail the ocean clean and clear
A place of fantasy my dear.
Hold my hand a rainbows walk
And we will whisper lover’s talk.

We’ll walk the garden of my green
And you will be my only queen.
We’ll listen to the birds that sing
And toll the bells and make them ring.

I’ll pick you flowers for your hair
Only the fairest of the fair
We’ll fly together in the sky
Without a thought of where or why

We’ll joint together in our love
And fly away a single dove.


© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-05-31 07:32 AM


This is wonderfully romantic... I could just read your poetry forever, sweet Sy..
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-31 07:39 AM


Nan,
Come fly with me and we will fly forever.

ethome
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3 posted 2002-05-31 07:54 AM


Seymour
This is another romantic gem from your pen!

             "Sail the ocean clean and clear
              A place of fantasy my dear.
              Hold my hand a rainbows walk
              And we will whisper lover’s talk."

You're just as smooth as silk over polished glass!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-05-31 07:57 AM


ethome,
You sure know how to make a fellow feel good.

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-05-31 08:08 AM


Sy...the poetic Cyborg...You're the man!

Another nicely flowing romantic piece of
your poetic pie..  Thanx..

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-05-31 08:20 AM


Magnus,
Thank you my friend.

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7 posted 2002-05-31 08:39 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, she is such a lucky woman and I know she will always be blessed to fly with you close to her heart to dreams come true! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-05-31 08:58 AM


Sy, I so much enjoy a read from you each morning.
This one is so soft and lyrical...lovely.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-05-31 10:21 AM


I would you with me when I ride
The moon that motivates the tide

Wear the silver jewels of light
And dance with me throughout the night.

Sail the ocean clean and clear
A place of fantasy my dear.
Hold my hand a rainbows walk
And we will whisper lover's talk.

===================================


You just turned us all into butterflies with this delightful write of melody and meter me Stinkylove  
Who could resist this invitation to fly in the mist.
"NOT I" said the moth  

So where does a moth book her fantasy flight to Shangri-la anyway?
Randy Dragon Travel Agency?  *L*  


I would you with me when I ride
The moon that motivates the tide



could that line be any cooler????

"METHINKS NOT" say the moth  lol

*winkiwinkie my high flying Stinky.


Cant stand up for fallin apart
Cant see through this veil across my heart, over you-
Youll always be the one.
You were the first, youll be the last

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (05-31-2002 10:22 AM).]

Marsha
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10 posted 2002-05-31 10:40 AM


Seymour darling boy, Ohhhhhhh this is so entrancingly beautiful I feel as if an angel has breathed over my soul. Your writing is always special today its exceptionally so. This really is superb writing.

For me darling Seymour how perfectly divine of you, I’d let you bedeck me with flowers any day

Seriously I utterly utterly adore this one it has the feel of a crystal stream of living light, the beauty of heaven’s stars and the fluidity of silk. Truly exquisite writing as you always manage to do you’ve captivated me again. I love it I utterly utterly love it
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Martie
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11 posted 2002-05-31 10:51 AM


Sy

"I’ll pick you flowers for your hair
Only the fairest of the fair
We’ll fly together in the sky
Without a thought of where or why"

When you think a fantasy, you sure do make it pretty!


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12 posted 2002-05-31 10:56 AM


So beautifully romantic... I like this very much, Seymour!!! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-05-31 12:54 PM


Thank you Noah,

Enchantress,
Thank you for the lovely and the hugs.

JM,
Yes, Randy dragons travel agency, But be sure to take out insurance. Winkiewinkie Stinky.

Marsha,
And I love your replies.

Martie,
Always do it with flowers.

Suthern,
Thank you my dear,

Toerag
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14 posted 2002-05-31 02:33 PM


Sigh, you old romantic....I thought this was gonna be an airline commercial or something....I hate flying don't you?...Well, I mean "literal" flying....

The mouths
Of stewardesses
On Aeroplanes
Are the most standard
Mouths in the world
I stare in awe
At their springtime
Doublespearminted smiles
As they teach me all about
The oxygen mask.

suthern
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15 posted 2002-05-31 02:48 PM


Toe, just be glad they've been chewing spearmint... otherwise, they might smell like the last lush they hauled off the plane! LOL

Sorry, Seymour. *G* I usually bombard him with my comments through email... but we're having this teensy tiny incredibly infuriating email problem! LOL)

[This message has been edited by suthern (05-31-2002 03:01 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-05-31 03:34 PM


Toe,
You are a talented funny guy, With a propensity for funny bones but I enjoy your humor.

Suthern,
LOL what else can I say.

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-05-31 04:09 PM


Wear the silver jewels of light
And dance with me throughout the night.

A beautiful romantic poem, Sy....

But if I dance with you, will you buy me some expensive jewelry?

~ hugs of silver

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2002-05-31 05:30 PM


Lyra,
Moon silver is about as expensive as it gets.
LOL Hugs back.

Krissy
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19 posted 2002-05-31 07:12 PM


Seymour Hi there again your writing fills me with awe, it’s incredibly beautiful and so picturesque. You certainly have an incredible talent for sprinkling these blue pages with diamonds and star-studded delights.

You see I’m spending way too much time with my mother I’m beginning to sound like her now, this really is something special and I love it too.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Sunshine
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20 posted 2002-05-31 07:22 PM


See the diamonds in her eye
a tiara for his butterfly
his poet gems glittering free
by his side is where she'll be



Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2002-05-31 08:09 PM


Beautiful sunshine.
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2002-05-31 10:39 PM


Krissy,
Forgive me dear for not answering right away.
Sometimes you just get pulled into other things.
Your answer was a delight to read. And I rate you as a very good poet.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-01-2002 07:52 AM).]

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