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Once In a While
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Once In a While |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Once in a while the wind blows soft To help your dreams to soar aloft Life left behind by hearth and croft In only once in a while On winds of change the future's clear And nurtures gift is ever near I climb and to the future peer But only once in a while To soar above on eagle's wings And hear the wishing through their rings As rainbows beckon angel things If only once in a while To rise above without a doubt And echo back as earth gives shout To live and learn what hope's about Yet only one in a while For once in a while ere strength is gone There comes Gods grace to carry on If you can say thy will be done Much more than once in a while Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (04-12-2002 09:49 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Once in a while you come out with a treasure. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and keeper of my souls song, as always you write with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The beauty of your words uplift a soul more than once in a while. Well done darling heart, exquisite writing. This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do. Oh how I wish I could write like this, I can hear your heart and soul lifting onto angels wings, this is seriously good. Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
K lady, amazing what you do to words and make images out of them enjoyed you here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I read the first verses thinking of how those "once in a while"s give us the strength for all the inbetweens... though sometimes it seems they're spaced entirely too far apart. *S* And then came your last verse with the source of strength. *S* This is lovely, Kethry. *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh Keth, This is so excellent. The rhyme scheme, the images, the clincher at the end. A true poem. A wonder. Nan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Yes, yes, if only we ask for His grace and entourage, much can always be done in a moment every step of the way with His compassion in mind! (kiss on cheek) This is excelelnt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the thoughts...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree with suthern...great piece here! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
keth, this was so beautiful and tender~ you have a remarkable gift and grace these wonderful pages of blue... wonderful write! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice bit of philosophical waxing here, Keth |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kethry, fantastic! A real treat of read and I thank you4sharing your poem... *~coco~* |
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