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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-30 02:03 PM



Winds Of Change

one day
the wind blew
just right
floating you
right into
my life
and we
rolled on
the breeze
and the air
filled me
with life

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-05-30 02:05 PM


When you are write, you ARE right.
This is absolutely fabulous!
MORE!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-05-30 02:05 PM



This is really, really nice!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
3 posted 2002-05-30 02:23 PM


slickster

yep sounds like me
and my pet kite (grin)
enjoyed you in this one

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2002-05-30 02:25 PM


Soft and simple but still moving with feeling and action...nice work!
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