Tonight is Villanelle night

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2002-04-11 08:36 PM

It is the same here every night
I'm hanging here for my pc
And so against the sleep I fight

Am I addicted? Yes I might
Sometimes I wish I wouldn't be
It is the same here every night

During day and during night
I have to do so much you see
And so against the sleep I fight

In sunset's fading orange light
I work on this darned pedigree
It is the same here every night

But I'll be filled with little pride
When it is done, and done by me
And so against the sleep I fight

But I'm no fool, I know alright
That really I'll be never free
It is the same here every night
And so against the sleep I fight

Again I apologize for not replying too often to all your lovely verses. It's 3.00 am overhere and I have to work tomorrow, ARGHHHHH

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (04-11-2002 08:53 PM).]

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2002-04-11 09:03 PM

Bravo, Titia....a wonderful vilanelle!!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2002-04-12 10:03 AM

This is wonderful, Titia! *S* When I go without sleep, I'm just tired and grumpy... you write words that delight. *S* Well done!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-04-17 01:11 AM

Titia~
You talent runneth all over the pages blue~
A lovely Villanelle from you~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-04-17 01:19 AM

As I finished reading this, I knew this was wonderful. But, praise from Balladeer? -That's the word!

Poet, take a bow!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2002-04-17 04:46 PM

Sweet Deer, you mean you gave me a straight A????

Suthern, ahhhh I get tired and grumpy sometimes too, well, that's what my hubby tells me LOL

Marge, my big kiss is runneth towards you

Melissa dear, I'm already walking besides my shoes, as they say overhere.

Thank you friends

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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