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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-05-25 12:34 PM


Moments

Sadness may well be stalking my soul
Getting ready to rip it out whole
But if it’s waiting around the bend
I’ll try to avoid my sad faced friend
There’ll be time later to face the pain
To play these moments over again
I want the sight I hold in my heart
To be of joy that will not depart

Unshed tears might make my poor eyes ache
I’m willing to hide them for your sake
This picture of love's eternal light
Please take it with you into the night
Keep the memory of this love’s glow
Always alight forever on show
I know you truly love only me
I can see that in your eyes clearly

This despair might wait to crush my heart
Keeping us seperate and apart
I’m not listening to its call to me
I will stay with you in liberty
All I ask is to recall your touch
When I’m alone missing you too much
I want to hold this moment to me
To have had our time of destiny

Marsha



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-05-25 12:44 PM


Marsha, I feel this way alot of times.
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-05-25 12:45 PM


I want the sight I hold in my heart
To be of joy that will not depart

and I want that for you too..

as always..a wonderful write
hugs
M

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-05-25 12:47 PM


Your sadness comes through the words of this beautiful poem, Narsha...
I hope things right themselves for you again soon

~loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

vandana
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4 posted 2002-05-25 06:03 PM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-25 07:56 PM


Marsha,
Such a sad loving write. I'm sure he cannot resist it.

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-05-25 10:08 PM


This is one of your best. I've felt this way before, and you describe it well.

Nan

ethome
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7 posted 2002-05-25 10:10 PM


Marsha   a sad write coming from such a open hearted poet!  Hope things will work out for you so you can bubble all over this forum
Good to hear from you!

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-05-25 11:03 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, I know just how you feel, I too love my dream girl Joanna so very much but still I feel sad sometimes thinking if we may ever see each other and if I can make her mine and love her forver like I want to! (sigh) My heart goes out to you and I now everything will turn out all right in the end, you'll see, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-25-2002 11:04 PM).]

Aimster
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9 posted 2002-05-26 01:58 AM


sis....

this was so just so sad and full of
such longing...you've brought me to
tears, and your words are still so
beautiful...as you hold on with hope.
i've learned so much from you...now it
is my pleasure to walk with you through
all you're going through. i love you!  
love
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (05-26-2002 01:59 AM).]

SEA
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10 posted 2002-05-26 02:20 AM


Mushy,
my goodness....this is so so beautiful and the love just sparkles!

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11 posted 2002-05-26 08:25 AM



Silver linings 'round
all your thoughts,
and feelings, Mushy...

Marsha
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12 posted 2002-05-26 10:06 AM


A quick word of explanation this isn’t about me being unhappy it’s about how short our time here on earth is. Mortality being something I’ve had brought closer to my attention in the last few months.

Thank you all for your kindness and love. And truly I am ecstatically happy I am beloved by the one who truly loves me.
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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