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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-25 07:14 AM


Break  (Sincerely)

How's it gonna be when we break?
I don't want my heart to ache. (but it will)
Will I be able to live without you?
Looking like I'll probably have to.
I am willing to beg you not to leave me
but what good will it do if it is your
desire to be free of me.
I need to scream.
I want to shout.
Any chance of us
working this out?
Perhaps we could but you
seem to have your doubts.
I know that you want
my permission to go.
And I will give it to you
if thats what you want to do.
Honey I don't want to
break with you. (but I will)
Now tell me none of  
this is real.

Sincerely,

JamesLee
May25
2002



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1 posted 2002-05-25 10:05 AM



Work toward the holding

study the molding

life's built in adjust

lay quality in trust...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-25 10:14 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, I hope she certainly does not want to break up with a wonderful person like you, sweet friend, you are so very special and I know your true love will always be happy to have you and if she doesn't want you, she doesn't deserve you! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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3 posted 2002-05-25 11:36 AM


I hope it's not real James...I hope she stays for good and warms the very depths of your soul.........nice write!
Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-05-25 12:57 PM


Beautiful sadness in this piece, James....

It reminds me of the day my first husband died.  I asked him not to go, but he had to....and then I asked him if he could take me with him, but he couldn't.
Finally, I asked him to send me a sign that he was still there...and he did.  It is written in my poem, posted a bit earlier...for Larry, "Flutter by"

~ hope all is well with you hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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