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Remembering When.....
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Remembering When..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Revised and rewritten……….set to paper with pen Thoughts of I miss you……….with I remember you when When yesterday was tomorrow……….and today was just a dream, yet real All I lived for was your laughter……….the way you made me feel Somehow life moved too quickly……….tomorrow became yesterday The moment passed me by……….I never got the chance to say You were the moon and stars I wished upon……….my every dream, complete You were my ocean’s tide soothing……….echoing each heart beat Your eyes held the depths……….of my soul’s fantasy Your touch was the fire……….that burns endlessly You were my music……….my dance in the rain Yours was the kiss…….that made my lips whisper, again Not a day passes without holding you…..….in sweet revere My once upon a should have been………that was never meant to be ~SEA~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey SEA, are we living in a parallel universe?? I could have written every line. Memories…when that’s all that’s left…write ‘em down. And you did…gently and tenderly. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet SEA~ *sigh* this is so beautiful, your words seeping inside of me....thanks for sharing this beautiful write with us all ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I know that feeling all too well. MUCH too well, I suppose. Love you dearly, my friend.  (((hugs))) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is beautiful and sad my dear, much enjoyed though in each respect. I have been there too, its no fun at all. Hope all is good {{{HUGZ}}}  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautifully written hugss M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, SEA...you have written a poem for Janet Marie...and you've done a wonderful job of it! So, when is the transition taking place, exactly? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I see your writing with a sad theme once again but you do it so beautifully. Excellent reflections on a deeply motivated love passed.....a real pleasure to read! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Trip him the next time....then smother him with a thousand kisses....whispering "again" over and over... Sad...but so very beautiful...even the face of the woman lends one to see inner reflection... of another time...of before... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*Smiling at Magnus's remarks* This is so beautiful Susan... Absolutley love it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Susan, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, alwyas hold thes ememories close and let new happy memories of love come in and sing like happy songbirds to your heart! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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