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RSEvans
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0 posted 2002-05-24 10:35 AM


There is an age within her eyes
  A wisdom's sparkle neath her lids
A betrayal of endless summer night
  And all the warmth that comes with it.
She smiles and a room lights to see her
  Ivory grin more bright from the feeling
And all the world sees her fervor
  As the room lights floor to ceiling.
No worry adorns her delicate brow
  Whereupon should be placed a crown
For she rules my heart somehow
  And its throne she rests upon.
What gift could one give to such as she?
  What token of admiration could dare
To shine brighter than her?  It couldn't be
  None could dare to compare.
So I fawn to thee, my day and night
  My sun and moon and stars.
And give you my heart in endless flight
  To you, wherever you are.

Chivalry is not dead.  I saw it coughing up lung butter last night, but it was still alive.  I think it has parvo.

© Copyright 2002 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-05-24 10:39 AM


RSEvans
A very good write, I enjoyed.

ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-24 11:06 AM


Well this is as a romantic a vision as one is going to read! I hope you find her and I hope you clone her for me. I live a long way away so there'll be no mix-ups. Just send her to
Mr. Romantically inclined
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Eldorado....This Planet!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-05-24 12:04 PM


RSEvans~
It's so very nice to see you here again~

'She smiles and a room lights to see her'

What an absolutely enchanting thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-05-24 12:20 PM


Oh My!  This piece is just one huge sigh!
And I am smiling from ear to ear....
This is exquisite...and I'm keeping it!!
~Sigh Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Denise
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5 posted 2002-05-24 08:21 PM


Beautifully done, RS! So good to see you again!
Duncan
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6 posted 2002-05-24 08:49 PM


For she rules my heart somehow
  And its throne she rests upon.
What gift could one give to such as she?
  What token of admiration could dare
To shine brighter than her?  It couldn't be
  None could dare to compare.

A sentiment I very much understand.

devina
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Cali
7 posted 2002-05-25 03:24 PM


You just may have her and not even realize it my sweet...

these things are molds in the making sometimes...

very sweet edition of you Rob!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



RSEvans
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Tulsa, OK, USA
8 posted 2002-05-25 05:36 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful replies.  Thanks, T for making me smile, and I'll see you in the good forum
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