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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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River beds that run their course once they did but tricle valleys deepen into gorges once they did but ripple. planets that divides rock strewn in space asteroid belts compromise unwinding of heaven's lace tiny foot that fits a hand on two or more, bodies then stand mountain brooks lead us to dreams unfolded spool of ribboned streams Along those river beds I grasp thoughts to understand how the vigorous widen parameters then meander.... how tiny feet alight this land not long after goose meets gander. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-23-2002 09:44 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Enjoyed the read and the very clever ending. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Martin You do question the grand plan, don't you...and on such a large scale. Much enjoyed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pondering the mysteries! Oh yes...love this, I DO! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I enjoyed the read. I like the general inqusitiveness of the lines. Not saying I agree with all of it but really enjoy the stimulation of the ideas. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
ethome, there's much in the way of inquisitiveness, thanks for sharing. Martie, grand plan it is  Serenity A way of asking where we're going to, thanks for sharing |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sy, glad you like the ending |
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