Underwater..thanks to Corinne

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #20

Underwater..thanks to Corinne

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-05-23 12:46 PM

thanking you for the inspiration

look into the pond,
what do you see?
reflection of a face, on clear days
bough of a tree
sunlit crested ripples
shield shallow homes...surfaces stippled
mirrors cumulous skys above?
supports a feather of a dove.

delve into ocean depths,
do you see the same?
vast acquatic realms,
feeding coral reefs...great blue signals
reflected sounds of endangered species
trough of untold human feces,
deep sea treasure chests laid bare
hull planks deposited far from glare.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-23-2002 12:47 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-05-23 07:01 AM

I do like it when others feel someone's touch, and come back with something from their soul...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-23-2002 07:02 AM).]

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-05-23 08:58 AM

Karilea,

I get your point, Corinne's touch was somewhat nostalgic..I wanted to amplify some points moreso and in effect its how I see it, less picturesque and sensual...revealing some harsher realities

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-23-2002 09:00 AM).]

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.