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kellinjar
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2002-05-21 01:48 AM


Do you feel what I feel
emotions rolling like a wheel
Things unsaid, things implied
exploring slowly, run and hide
confusion, uncertaintity reigns
commitments made, love a bane
a look in your eye, questions unaswered
hidden in your soul, quenched and tortured
sadness and regret, a moment lost
a different time, a priceless cost
whatever will be will be
but will you ever be with me?

--
Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-21 04:30 AM


This is quite a summation with such a pleading yearning ending!
Nicely done and let me say it's a pleasure to welcome a fellow New Brunswicker from Canada to Passions.....Great to have you here. May you experience the same joy that I have since I joined a couple of years ago!

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2 posted 2002-05-21 08:27 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Matthews, I can feel such yearning in thes words, sweet friend, I hope soon you find all your heart desires and will always stand by you and listen to you always! (sigh) I am so delighted to read your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matthew, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-21-2002 08:28 AM).]

kellinjar
Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40
New Brunswick, Canada
3 posted 2002-05-21 11:16 AM


Thank you for the welcome I did not think that I would run into another NBer here on the boards, what part are you from?I hail from just south of Moncton

--
Kellinjar
http://www.geocities.com/kellinjar/ps/

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