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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-20 08:12 PM



Lousy Poetic Waxing

~*Marge Tindal*~

She said, "Just once could you write something lousy ?"
/pip/Forum69/HTML/000129.html#18 I laughed right out loud ....
for lousy is something that I know
won't make me very proud~

But, I'm here to do requests
for friends who ask with glee
Now here's a lousy verse
not waxed so poetically~

Inside-out there is a place
where outside-in won't do
but if I make it rhyme just right
I'll bet I can fool even you~

You may laugh behind my back
and slather your reply with praising glee
but, you know that I will know
you're lying through your keys~

Right up front, I'll confess
this one is pretty lame
but ... it's a L'Oreal Blonde day in Florida
and it's even begun to rain~

*Okay, my Marti friend -
Miss NewEnglandlazurlu
How about it ???
Is this one lousy enough for you ?

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-20 08:22 PM


Marge,  I am really pleased that you write
such beautifully lousy poetry.... HA!...

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2 posted 2002-05-20 08:26 PM


Magnus~
Awwwww !
Now why do I get the distinct impression you could talk an Eskimo into purchasing ice cubes ?

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-05-20 08:33 PM


Marge,
Is that anything like bikini waxing? I'm afraid to look.

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4 posted 2002-05-20 08:41 PM


Larry~
Ohhhhh, go ahead and LOOK !
Your suggestion is even funnier than my entire lousy rhyme~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-05-20 08:46 PM


I've been waning a long time for a piece of lousy poetry from you... Still waning..
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6 posted 2002-05-20 08:50 PM


Nanners~
LOL ... only you would think up 'waning' ... only you !
Good Gawd Girlie ... how much worse could it get ??????
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2002-05-20 09:25 PM


Marge--It's just not in you...so give up!!  and
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8 posted 2002-05-20 09:37 PM


Oh my Lordy, I'm pee'ing my panties laughing. This is THE best and most brilliant 'lousy' poem I have ever had the honor of reading. Girlfriend, you just hang onto that sense of humor and never let it go! I love ya....Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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9 posted 2002-05-20 11:23 PM


Marge:  This is definitely not up to your usual standard!  However I do believe it has established a standard of it's own! Maybe it could be called "the best of the worst!".

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-05-21 05:10 AM


He he Good fun Marge as you can do so well!  You can even make lousy good!
I was wonderfing when I started the read if you might start on a verse about your flea infested cat or something like that!!
Have a nice day....you're precious!!

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11 posted 2002-05-21 07:08 AM



Nope, can't do it.  You failed at writing lousy...

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12 posted 2002-05-21 08:53 AM


Thanks for the smile
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-05-22 09:18 AM


I'm convinced, through and through
There's just one thing you cannot do:
You can't deny your gift with word!
Though you might create some absurd
Attempt to write at less than best...
Forget it, Marge... you failed this test!

LOL... Hon, if you want to post a lousy poem, just let me know... I have boxes full of the things! LOL

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14 posted 2002-05-22 09:26 AM


Marge,
Only got one answer to this.

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